2012年5月30日 星期三

「修身,齊家,治國,平天下」的英譯


China News )中有Dear Abby專欄,在1999年一月一日的專欄Promises for a New Year中有一段
And as we begin this bright, shiny New Year, consider this inspirational Chinese proverb:
If there is righteousness in the heart, there will be beauty in the character.
If there is beauty in the character, there will be harmony in the home.
If there is harmony in the home, there will be order in the nation.
"When there is order in the nation, there will be peace in the world.

複合字

引用來源:
http://www.ep66.com.tw/compound%202.htm
http://www.ep66.com.tw/compound%203.htm




複合字是新聞雜誌的精華(The beauty),也是其重要的特徵之一。雜誌中的每頁幾乎都有複合字的出現,頻率之繁非其他特徵能相提並論。

本人曾在拙作”美國新聞雜誌英文之分析”一書中,對複合字作有系統而完想的分析,共編成十大類型-幾乎可涵蓋三本著名雜誌﹝時代雜誌(Time),新聞週刊(Newsweek)及美國新聞及世界報導(U.S. News & World Report)﹞中所出現的複合字。

複合字是一種語文的化學反應(Chemical reaction in language),也是語言上的經濟手法(linguistic economy device)。其轉換過程是先將子句(clause)變為片語(Phrase),再把片語變為字(Word)-即是複合字。其中的關係代名詞(Relative Pronoun)和介係詞(preposition),皆可刪除。且舉例說明:

例一:The girl who has big eyes is my student.

Ø The girl with big eyes is my student.

Ø The big-eyed girl is my student.

(大眼睛的女孩是我的學生)



例二:That man who is conscious of image is here.

Ø That man conscious of image is here.

Ø That image-conscious man is here.

(那位重形象的人在此)



本人將複合字十大類型,分期陸續作一較有系統的介紹。本期僅介紹第一大類型。

A V-ing as pivot-element type:

(以V-ing為構成複合字的主要成份)

A-1 (N-V-ing)

The boy who hits the book is a straight-A student.

Ø The book-hitting boy is a straight-A student.

(這位K書的學生是優等生)

The man who abides by the law is a good citizen

=The law-abiding man is a good citizen.

(奉公守法的人是好國民)

其他例子:

Peace-loving people(愛好和平的人士)

fact-finding group(視察團)

注意:1. 本類型中的動詞一定是主動語態(active voice)

2. 凡慣用語中由動詞與名詞組成的,皆可變成形容詞複合字。如:

pass the buck--buck-passing(推諉責任的)

lose face--face-losing(丟臉的)

tighten one’s belt--belt-tightening(節省的)

twist one’s arm--arm-twisting(強迫的)

但是,慣用語中的名詞若是複數,必須把複數改為單數。例如:

mend one’s fences--fence-mending(改善關係)

spill the beans--bean-spilling(洩漏秘密)

name names--name-naming(指名帶姓指認出)

call one names--name-calling(中傷)
例外:

……….take pains—painstaking(費時費力)



A-2 (self-V-ing)

The clock which winds itself looks beautiful.

Ø The self-winding clock looks beautiful

(自動上發條的鐘看起來很美觀)

The student who supports himself works at a fast-food restaurant.

Ø The self-supporting student works at a fast-food restaurant.

(自力更生的學生在一家速食店工作)。

本類型中的反身代名詞(Reflexive Pronoun),一律改成self-



A-3 (Adj-V-ing)

The pill which tastes bitter is a panacea.

Ø The bitter-tasting pill is a panacea.

(這苦味的藥丸是一種萬靈丹)

The man who looks handsome is a movie star.

Ø The handsome-looking man is a movie star.

(這位長的很帥的人是電影明星)

本類型中的動詞,僅限於連綴動詞(Linking Verbs:be, become, grow等)和感官動詞(Sense Verbs:look, sound, taste, smell, feel等)



A-4 (Adv-V-ing)

(a)The adverbs with-ly:

The bus which moves slowly broke down on the road.

Ø The slowly-moving bus broke down on the road.

(走得很慢的公車拋錨在路中)

The company which expands rapidly went bust/broke/under.

Ø The rapidly-expanding company went bust/broke/under.

(擴張迅速的公司倒閉了)

(b)The adverbs such as hard, far, well, ill, fast, etc:

The man who works hard can go a long way.

Ø The hard-working man can go a long way.

(認真工作的人一定會成功)

The custom which reaches far is a good one.

Ø The far-reaching custom is a good one.

(影響深遠的習俗是好習俗)

(c)The adverbs of frequency:always, usually often, sometimes, seldom and never.

The population which always increases is amazing.

Ø The ever-increasing population is amazing.

(不斷增加的人口相當驚人的)

The rule which often changes makes people confused.

Ø The oft-changing rule makes people confused.

(常常改變的規矩令人無法適從)。

本類型中,要特別注意-換成複合字過程中,應將always改成ever-,以及often改為oft-,其餘不必交換。



A- 5(P-V-ing)(P指介係詞(preposition))

The call which comes in is from John Doe.

Ø The in-coming call is from John Doe.

(打進來的電話是張三打來的)

The call which goes out is from Richard Roe.

Ø The out-going call is from Richard Roe.

(打出去的電話是李四打的)

但,in-coming、out-going具有不同的意義,如:

in-coming ship(進港的船)

out-going ship(出港的船)

in-coming Premier(即將上任的行政院長)

out-going Premier(即將卸任的行政院長)



B. V-pp as pivot-element Type:
   (以V-pp<動詞過去分詞>為構成複合字的主要成分)
  B-1(N-V-pp):
      The dress which is made by a tailor costs much more expensive.
Ø          The tailor-made dress costs much more expensive.
(訂做的衣服較為昂貴)
The wine which is made at home tastes wonderful.
Ø          The home-made wine tastes wonderful.
國產的酒味道不錯)

  本類型中動詞,一定是被動語態(Passive Voice)。出現率相當頻繁。
  B-2(Self-V-pp):
      The scholar who was educated by himself passed away yesterday:
Ø          The self-educated scholar passed away yesterday.
(那位無師自通的學者昨天去世。)
The man who was made by himself started his business on a shoestring.
Ø          The self-made man started his business on a shoestring.
(那位白手起家的人靠極少的資本開始做生意。)

  本類型中的反身代名詞(Reflexive Pronoun),一律改成Self-字樣。
  B-3(Adj-V-pp)
      The food which is made ready is a steal.
Ø          The ready-made food is a steal.
現成的食物價格如檢來的便宜東西。)
The meat which is roasted fresh looks awful.
Ø          The fresh-roasted meat looks awful.
現烤的肉看起來很噁心。)
  B-4(Adv-V-pp):
1. The adverbs with the ending-ly.
The plan which was developed recently started with a bang.
Ø          The recently-developed plan started with a bang.
最近發展的計畫進行的有聲有色。)
2. The adverbs such hardfarwellillfast、etc.
The area which is hit hard has been declared a disaster zone.
Ø          The hard-hit area has been declared a disaster zone.
受損嚴重的地區被視為災區。)
3. The adverbs of frequency:alwaysusuallysometimesseldom and never.
The law which is always criticized must make some adjustment.
Ø          The ever-criticized law must make some adjustment.
一直受批評的法規應做適度的調整。)

  本類型中,在轉變複合字過程中,應將always改成ever-,和often改為oft-,其餘照原字不必更換。
B-5(V-pp-P) (P.係指介系詞Preposition)。
    The worker who was laid off staged a sit-in.
Ø          The laid-off worker staged a sit-in.
被裁員的工人開始靜坐抗議。)
    The plan which is well thought out works wonders.
Ø          The well-thought-out plan works wonders.
經過深思熟慮的計畫獲得令人驚奇的成功。)

   本類型中,複合字形成大部分來自慣用語。
C-Adj as pivot-element Type:
  (以形容詞為構成複合字的主要成份。)
C-1(N-Adj):
    The adjectives such as :-conscious、-foolish、-free、-greedy、-happy、-high、-hungry、-long、-mad、-proof、-prone、-proud、-sich、-rich、-short、-thirsty、-weary、-wide、-wise、-worthy、etc.
    The candidate who is conscious of image was defeated in the election.
    =The image-conscious candidate was defeated in the election.
      (注重形象的候選人選舉失利。)
    The lawmaker who is greedy for power is looked down upon by the people.
    =The power-greedy lawmaker is looked down upon by the people.
    (貪勢貪利的立委令人瞧不起。)
    The country which is rich in oil has a cradle-to-grave social welfare system.
    =The oil-rich country has a cradle-to-grave social welfare system.
    (盛產石油的國家施行終生社會福利制度。)

     本類型中,形成複合字過程中,形容詞後的介系詞(be+Adj+prep+N),皆應刪
除。

     又此類型常以as..as型態出現。例子如下:
     The sword is as sharp as razor = The razor-sharp sword.
     (銳如刀片的劍。)

其他例子如下:
dirt-cheap(賤如糞土的)
feather-light(輕如羽毛的)
fire-hot(火熱的)
ice-cold(冰冷的)
brand-new(全新的)
paper-thin(薄如紙,極微的)
pitch-dark(漆黑的)
rock-hard(硬如石的)
sky-high(高入雲霄的,極高的)
snow-white(雪白的)
C-2(Self-Adj):
    The girl who is conscious of herself seldom goes to the party.
    =The self-conscious girl seldom goes to the party.
    (羞怯的女孩子很少參加宴會。)

     本類型中,不要忘記把反身代名詞,改成self-字樣。
C-3(Adv-Adj)
    The threat which is always present makes people ill at ease.
    =The ever-present threat makes people ill at ease.
    (一直存在的威脅令人不安。)
    The student who is often absent was eventually kicked out of school.
    =The oft-absent was eventually kicked out of school.
    (常常缺席的學生終於被學校開除。)

同樣的,本類型中的alwaysoften,勿忘記改的ever-、oft-字樣。
D-P as pivot-element Type:
(以介系詞為首的慣用語,成為製造複合字的主要成份)。
此類型最簡單,最容易。在更換過程中,隻字都不必更改更換,只在字與字間加上連字號(hyphen)即可。例子如下:
  behind-the-scenes meeting(幕後的秘密的會議
  a university is on the air.=An on-the-air university(空中大學)
  The patient who has a nurse around the clock.
  =The patience has a round-the-clock nurse service.
(那位病人24小時有護士照顧。)
We will welcome our guests with open arms.
=We will give our guests a with-open-arms welcome.
(我們將以最隆重歡迎來迎接我們的客人。)

其他例子如下:
on-the-run suspect(逃亡中的嫌犯)
still-at-large murder(消遙法外的兇手)
on-the-spot inspection(現場的視察)
across-the-board pay hike(全盤性的加薪)
under-the-counter sale(秘密的交易)
over-the-counter medicine(公開出售的藥,既成藥)


E. Preposition Compounds : 以(Noun + Preposition + Noun)為構成複合字的主要成份,其中的介系詞以to. by. for 和in為主。
        E-1 (N - to - N):
(a) (N - to - N): (Same):
face-to-face meeting  (面對面的會議)
shoulder-to-shoulder fight  (並肩作戰)
heart-to-heart talk  (衷誠的談話)
eye-to-eye agreement  (完全的同意)
neck-to-neck contest  (不分上下的比賽)
(b) (N - to - N): (from N to N):
cover-to-cover reading  (逐字逐頁的閱讀)
house-to-house sale  (挨家挨戶的推銷)
coast-to-coast tour  (全國性的旅遊)
(c) (N - to - N): (from A to B):
dusk-to-dawn curfew  (傍晚至天亮的戒嚴)
rags-to-riches man  (白手起家的人)
hand-to-mouth life  (僅足餬口的生活)
cradle-to-grave plan  (一生的計劃)
nine-to-five man  (朝九晚五的人)
        E-2 (N - by - N):
            step-by-step teaching  (按部就班的教學)
            case-by-case basic  (個別的方式)
            side-by-side fight  (並肩作戰)
        E-3 (N - for - N):
            word-for-word translation  (逐字的翻譯)
            eye-for-eye revenge  (以眼還眼的報復)
            tooth-for-tooth bloodshed  (以牙還牙的流血)
            tit-for-tat lashing  (一報還一報的鞭打)
        E-4 (N - of- ( the ) -N):
            state-of-the-art hi-tech  (頂棒的尖端科技)
            top-of-the-line weapon  (精良的武器)
            wind-of-change politician  (巨變中的政治人物)
            run-of-the-mill affair  (平凡的事物)
        E-5 (N - in- ( the ) -N):
head-in-the-sand thinking  (不切實際的想法)
                hole-in-the-wall store  (簡陋的小店)
               flash-in-the-pan success  (短暫的成長)
pie-in-the-sky vision  (虛幻的遠景)

F. Conjunction Compounds :
F-1 (N - Conj - N):
(a) (N - and - N):
carrot-and-stick policy  (軟硬兼施的政策)
salt-and-pepper issue  (黑白的問題)
nickel-and-dime store  (小本的生意)
five-and-ten store  (同上)
mom-and-pop store  (同上)
boom-and-bust cycle  (繁榮與不景氣的交替)
(b) (N - or - N):
rain-or-shine picnic  (風雨無阻的郊遊)
neck-or-nothing election  (決定性的選舉)
all-or-nothing election  (同上)
feast-or-famine business  (時好時壞的生意)
        F-2 (V - Conj - V):
(a) (V - and - V):
wait-and-see attitude  (觀望的態度)
touch-and-go situation  (一觸即發的局面)
open-and-shut case  (簡單的案件)
give-and-take compromise  (互相讓步的妥協)
hum-and-haw answer  (吞白吐吐的回答)
(b) (V - or - V):
make-or-break election  (決定性的選舉)
make-or-mar election  (同上)
put-up-or-shut-up warning  (提出更好的意見否則閉嘴的警告)
shape-up-or-ship-out warning  (整頓否則解散的警告)
        F-3 (Adj - Conj - Adj):
(a) (Adj - and - Adj):
thick-and-thin friend  (同甘共苦的朋友)
null-and-void treaty  (完全無效的條約)
high-and-dry help  (孤苦無助)
rough-and-ready method  (權宜的方法)
(b) (Adj - or - Adj):
more-or-less loss  (或多或少的損失)
now-or-never chance  (千載難逢的機會)
(c) (Adj - but - Adj):
slow-but-sure progress  (穩定的進步)
separate-but-equal education  (隔離但平等的教育)
        F-4 (V-ing - Conj  V-ing):
            flipflopping-and-zigzagging policy  (優柔寡斷的政策)
            huffing-and-puffing warning  (怒沖沖的警告)
            toing-and-froing distance  (來回的路程)
            wheeling-and-dealing manager  (精明能幹的經理)
        F-5 (V-pp - Conj  V-pp):
            cut-and-dried meeting  (預先定好的會議)
            buried-and-forgotten man  (被遺忘的人)

G. Idiosycratic Compounds:
        G-1 Quotation compounds:
            no-news-is-good-news attitude  (無消息即好消息的態度)
            catch-as-you-catch speech  (臨時應付的演說)
            pay-as-you-go system  (預扣所得稅制度)
            引用複合字,為權宜起見,凡較長而無法歸類於上述幾項類型者,皆屬
本此類型。形成簡單,把全句,片語視為形容詞,字與字間加上連字號(-)即可。
        G-2 Adj - N-ed  Compounds
            這是複合字中最特殊的一種,其中名詞加上動詞過去式(N-ed),用途有
下列三種,分別說明如下:
(a) 身體任何部位(肉體上的或是精神上的):
long-faced girl  (拉長臉的女孩)
quick-witted  diplomat  (機警的外交官)
cold-blooded murder  (殘酷的謀殺)
tip-lipped official  (守口如瓶的官員)
(b) 房屋的任何部分:
high-ceiling house  (天花板高的屋子)
green-roofed building  (綠頂的大樓)
glass-walled atrium  (玻璃牆的中庭)
gold-domed building  (金圓頂的大樓)
(c) 顏色、大小尺寸、口味等等:
black-colored dress  (黑色的衣服)
medium-sized car  (中型的車子)
sour-flavored fruit  (酸味的水果)
        G-3 Odds-and-ends compounds:
would-be hero  (自充的英雄)
also-ran candidate  (落選的候選人)
has-been writer  (江郎才盡的作家)
odds-on candidate  (很可能當選的候選人)
can-do confidence  (幹勁十足的信心)

2012年5月29日 星期二

conjunctive adverb 的正確用法

首先,我發現Dr.eye 例句上有很多錯誤


http://www.nciku.com.tw/search/en/detail/nevertheless/51476

這線上字典比較正確

維基百科的清楚說明
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conjunctive_adverb


無論是however或是nevertheless,都只能當副詞,不能是連接詞,當然也不等於but。雖然有人稱他們為"連接副詞",但只代表語意上有連接的意思,他們還是副詞,不能用來連接兩個句子!無論單雙逗號都不行!

副詞若要插入句子裡作補充描述,要碼放句首句尾,要碼前後都要有逗號,而且只能用在單一句子裡面。例如:
I am handsome.      However, I am poor.
I am handsome.      I am, however, poor.
前面句子必須用句號結尾,然後再"另啟新句",用副詞however表達"然而"。
nevertheless和however都是連接副詞,語意上可能略有不同,但在句子裡的用法完全相同。

補充說明:只有連接詞能連接兩個句子,例如: I am poor, but I am happy.  用副詞連接兩個句子,否則就是犯了 Comma splice 文法錯誤。你舉的例句都有 Comma splice 錯誤。

關你犯的文法錯誤(however, nevertheless),wikipedia上有也有特別解釋:
According to Joanne Buckley, comma splices often arise when writers use conjunctive adverbs to separate two independent clauses instead of using a coordinating conjunction. A coordinating conjunction is one of the following seven words: forandnorbutoryetso. A conjunctive adverb is a word like furthermorehowever, or moreover. A conjunctive adverb and a comma (or a conjunctive adverb between two commas) is not strong enough to separate two independent clauses and creates a comma splice. For example, "There is no admission fee, however you will be responsible for any food you order." contains a comma splice with a conjunctive adverb.

for做連接詞的用法:
因為,由於

We must start early, for it will take two hours to drive to the airport.
我們得早點動身,因為開車去機場得花兩個小時。


Yet做連接詞的用法:
可是,卻,然而
I don't know him, yet I can get his help.
我不認識他,但我會得到他的幫助。



 forandnorbutoryetso之外也可以做連接詞的


either....or, neither.....nor, not only......but also, both......and

參考資料:
韋氏字典
nevertheless: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/nevertheless
however: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/however

Wikipedia
Comma splice: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comma_splice